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Post by Lupus on May 18, 2016 8:38:24 GMT -8
Hi 4
The sign up format is a bit different than it is on ZD
Please take some time to read some threads and decide
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Post by DekuNut on May 18, 2016 9:07:38 GMT -8
Yeah, check the application materials section. The concept is promising though
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Post by Deleted on May 18, 2016 12:32:25 GMT -8
Real Name: Tim Glass Gender: Male Age: 22 Occupation: Student Appearance: Clean-cut brown hair. Usually wears a tatty shirt and jeans combo. Real Personality: Serious and antisocial. Devotes a lot of time to his studies and martial arts training. He's never had a girlfriend, or even any close friends.
Super-Name: Cazador Powers/Skills: Augmented strength and speed. Skilled at shooting stuff. Basic skills in martial arts which he works on improving.
Alignment: CG
Fighting Style: Stealthy and fast. He usually just beats the crap out of people, sticking to the shadows, but is not afraid to kill.
Super Personality: A silent vigilante. Some idolise him as a revolutionary. Others are scared of him and think he is nothing more than a villain. He never talks but will very rarely leave written messages.
Costume: A black body suit, a pair of red night-vision glasses, a silenced pistol, and a grappling hook.
Identity: Secret
Backstory:
Tim grew up with his dad alone in rural areas across the US. His dad was an ex-Navy Seal and a hunter who taught him how to shoot, and always to respect the life you take. His dad hoped he would go into the military, but Tim instead went to do a biophysics degree at the esteemed Avalon Falls University. While there he designed a full body-suit to protect and enhance a soldier in battle, a way of apologising to his dad for not joining the army. One day he came back to his old home, only to find his dad had been murdered for not paying his debts to a gang known as the Blood Eagles. It turns out that they'd been where he'd got the money from to pay for Tim to go to university. They had killed his dad horrifically, splitting his ribcage from behind and pulling his lungs out to form 'wings'. His dad had been one of the many victims of a string of similarly horrible murders committed by the gang.
TIm swore to avenge his father by hunting down the members of the gang. He made use of his bodysuit, added a cape and night-vision lenses. He also built a grapplehook into one of the arms.
When hunting down members of the Blood Eagles, he realised that he could use his suit to help stop all crime. He gave himself the name 'Cazador', which is Spanish for 'Hunter', and proceeded to make a name for himself amongst crime fighters. As Cazador, he never speaks, but occasionally writes messages. Motivation: Avenging his father at first, but eventually becomes to bring down punishment on those he believes deserve it.
Group Affiliations: He works alone... for the moment.
Place of Origin: Avalon University
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Post by Lupus on May 18, 2016 12:44:37 GMT -8
Also, please dont write huge ass montonous blocks. I end up having to indent and bold stuff
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Post by DekuNut on May 18, 2016 12:54:46 GMT -8
Looks good to me.
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Post by DekuNut on May 18, 2016 12:55:23 GMT -8
Also, the alignment thing is where you are on the good/neutral/evil spectrum and the lawful/neutral/chaotic spectrum.
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Post by Deleted on May 18, 2016 12:57:18 GMT -8
Oh In that case I guess Tim would be good and chaotic
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Post by Lupus on May 19, 2016 8:31:13 GMT -8
Now I approve, having been able to read it
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