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Post by Doc on Jan 5, 2018 19:27:13 GMT -8
I'm baaaaaaaaccck. Real Name: Eve Bradley Gender: Female Age: 35 Occupation: Factory Worker Appearance: Eve has the body of a robot, and looks similar to this. However, she has one round eye on the front of her face and that is all. Real Personality: Eve has a strong work ethic and discipline. She is very family oriented and protective. Super-Name: Crimson Knight Powers/Skills: Super strength, flight, a gun in her right forearm, and a small cannon in her left Alignment: Lawful Good Fighting Style: She uses quick movement and her weapons to keep enemies at bay and catch them while they're distracted. Super Personality: Same as real personality Costume: N/A Identity: Public Backstory: Eve Bradley was the wife to Marc Bradley, an engineer. Marc was studying the human memories and isolating them while Eve worked to support him and also worked to take care of their two children. Playfully, Marc showed Eve the technology he was creating and made a copy of Eve’s memories. A few months later, an accident on a worksite kills Eve. Lost in his grief, Marc uploads the memories he copied into a robot. Motivation: Create a better future for her children Place of Origin: Avalon Falls
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Post by DekuNut on Jan 5, 2018 20:54:29 GMT -8
OH GOD NO WHY THE **** IS HE HERE er, I mean... looks good. May be kind of hard to hide what she is due to the whole one eye thing, but I have a feeling you included that on purpose. I'll get Storm in here to check it in a few.
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Post by Doc on Jan 5, 2018 21:01:23 GMT -8
Yikes, the link wasn't as clear as it appeared. She's very clearly a robot, I'll just post it here.
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Post by DekuNut on Jan 5, 2018 21:04:12 GMT -8
Oh awesome. Still approved.
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Post by Lupus on Jan 5, 2018 22:00:47 GMT -8
and it has come down to me to decide the fate of this char
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Post by Lupus on Jan 5, 2018 22:08:01 GMT -8
While I do agree with the character in some regard, the location is oner of the of-putting factors of the whole thing. you clearly show a simplistic robot. Marc is an engineer in a world of Synths. literally 4000 of Avalon falls finest are intricate robots that look and act humanoid, and you basically have the tin man walking around going " If I only had a heart", and why now? why do you feel like right now is the time, right after I finally destroyed the last remnants of Blink and Teo from the RP due to moving to Kansas. once I rose above the noide and pollution just to get a glimpse beyond this illusion I was soaring ever higher but I flew too high
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Post by DekuNut on Jan 5, 2018 22:13:41 GMT -8
Now that you say it out loud that's kind of a weird position our universe is in. That said, I have no doubts that the Order kept that kind of tech for themselves. Everyone else would be moving much slower, and even the doctor himself may not be at the top of robotics. It's not like the robot body is the focus of the creation anyways - it's the brain mapping, which is some high level stuff. And he feels like now is the time because I poked him.
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Post by Doc on Jan 5, 2018 23:00:27 GMT -8
Y'know what? This was a mistake, I should have known that. I'm sorry, DekuNut, but I can't come back. I don't appreciate the condescending tone about my "tin man." This is a character I thought you'd like or would work in the RP, but if you're not gonna give me any respect then I don't see why I would want to stick around.
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Post by DekuNut on Jan 5, 2018 23:22:23 GMT -8
Sorry this happened man. I'll see you around.
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